One day we were at the seashore,
bringing up nostalgic memories till dawn.
Supportive, caring and inspiring he was,
a protector of our realm like brothers in arms.
In bliss we drowned and to the stars we gazed,
keeping our fingers crossed for a lasting friendship.
A stranger he was, a best friend he became.
Special thanks to /r/Poetry for their poetry writing prompts and their motivation.
Youssef Writes 
April 18, 2016 at 10:22 pm
Well done. Keep it up!
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April 18, 2016 at 10:59 pm
Thanks, stranger.
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April 23, 2016 at 3:25 pm
The core of your writing whilst sounding agreeable originally, did not really work properly with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I still have got a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one would do well to fill in those gaps. In the event you can accomplish that, I would certainly end up being fascinated.
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April 24, 2016 at 7:12 pm
Will work on that.
Thanks!
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